What the Beaufort scale can teach you about copywriting


Simple and effective, the Beaufort scale paints you a picture of the winds. As copywriters, it reminds us why — when it comes to communication — it’s best to show, not tell.

How can you describe something you can't see? And how can you make sure you're describing it in the same way as other people? That was the problem facing sailors before Sir Francis Beaufort came along in the 19th century.

Try to describe the wind itself and you'll quickly run into trouble. Your idea of a "light breeze" might not be the same as someone else's. To them, it could be a "stiff breeze" – or is it gusty? What Beaufort realised was that it's far easier to describe the effects of the wind.

When you describe what the wind does, a storm becomes something where:

 
Large branches in motion; whistling heard in telegraph wires; umbrellas used with difficulty. Large waves, extensive foam crests.
— Force 6 (Strong Breeze) on the Beaufort Scale
 

Sir Francis's scale described the effect of the wind on the sails of a ship (it was later updated to include land observations), and gave each stage a number. The result is the Beaufort scale – a universal way of measuring and describing wind that could be transmitted quickly from shore to ship.

Having lived by the sea, I know just how useful the Beaufort scale is. Using a single number, it puts a clear picture in your mind of the kind of weather that's coming your way. Rather than telling you, it shows you.

Janet

Co-founder, language lover and sewist.

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